Tuesday, September 15, 2009

Boarding the Morning Metro (A Haiku)

This just came to me on the metro this morning - like a kind of divine revelation, enjoy.

Boarding the Morning Metro (A Haiku)

Bonjour smoker breath.
Bonjour offensive B.O.
Bonjour urine smell.

thanks for reading.

3 comments:

  1. You know what it smells like over here ... freedom

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  2. Sarah wants to know how you can make a mere 4 lines have us in tears!!

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  3. LOL. Ahhh, the morning trek.
    Bonjour, shoved in like sardines and leaving feeling a bit violated, wondering if that was a hand on my ass or just imagination?
    Bonjour! It's too early for all these %^&*ing steps and oh yeah- bonjour why are you sitting on the fold down chair when there's really no room for that in the morning, monsieur?
    (Not at all a Haiku)

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